Tuesday 24 July 2012

Poetry - These Relationships

The metaphors contained within the poem are seen from the first line which speaks of eyes crawling and in the sixth line another metaphor is found telling of a dying that is dangling. The poem is ambiguous in that it provides double meaning to aspects of the poem such as the scorched womanhood, this could mean either that this ‘womanhood’ is used up and dry or that it has nothing to offer these people that are devouring it. Line four which reads ‘these eyes growing in my thighs’ serves two purposes; one to change the tone of the poem and two to introduce an intrusion that the poem’s narrative voice finds foreign, maybe alluding to her virginity and it’s being taken. 

These Relationships


Eyes crawling up on me

I glistened

Honestly delighted, I am desired

What are these eyes growing in my thighs?

Devouring with the greatest of ease, my scorched womanhood

This dying dangling between my legs

Weaving on the framework of my existence, a burdened smile

It was always in the words of these God-forsaken men

I based the value of my self worth

Narrative writing - The Loft

 
The Loft


On a mildly warm autumn morning, the sun shone through the large bare wood panelled windows that wrapped themselves immodestly around two of the four walls that made up his large open plan loft apartment. The white walls wore black and white framed pictures of different sizes which portrayed New York skylines, Johannesburg streets, Spanish matadors, Kenyan Masai and a host of other things I didn’t know much about. A few dramatically abstract canvass paintings sat loud and proud on the floor and leaned nonchalantly against the windows. I threw a glance at the expansive ceilings that had three big medieval light fixtures stuck onto them, drew two deep breaths and decided to get up. I lifted myself off of the bed and the cold grey concrete floor jumped up to meet my feet. Standing up, I walked about the space taking in the furnishings that adorned the place. Sporadic and clean and white with tiny throws of colour in the form of cushions, vases, pashminas tossed casually on the sofa and of cause the paintings on the floor. Just off the entrance lay the kitchen area, all stainless steel appliances, lacquered white cupboards, black painted wooden open shelving which carried on it teal, orange and white mismatched bowls and cups and plates and canisters and other things required for the functionality of a kitchen. Just off the kitchen was the only door inside this big room, I concluded that beyond it lay the bathroom and decided not to go through it.

I stopped for a moment and looked aimlessly around, when I noticed the balcony on the other side of one of the windows. I steadied myself towards it and on my way lost focus when I found a hand written note placed on a small study desk weighed down by a heavy pearl coloured rock which served as a paper weight, “make yourself at home,” it read “I’m just meeting a client, please don’t leave. I’ll bring some coffee back with me. Xoxo.” I sat on the chair beside of desk and took it all in and a smile grew slowly on my face. 

With the steady rise of the sun the balcony beckoned for my presence and I ran out onto it. Opening the wide glass doors that made up part of the windows, the noise of people and cars going about their business in the street below was a harsh invasion of the silence on the inside. Although I was some way away from the ground level, on the eighth floor to be exact, I heard people’s laughter and small bits of their conversations. There was a distant sound made by sort of heavy machinery, taxi’s hooting, loud kwaito music coming from the building that stood in front of me and on it, three men on scaffolding were putting black and grey stripes onto that building and although it would ordinarily have not been possible, the heavy wind that blew encouraged my nostrils to take in the paint fumes. These combined with the smell of the sun presented a unique sensation to my senses.

Having adequately absorbed the balcony and all it had to offer I walked back into the flat and for the first time since my arrival I saw his personal pictures in wooden frames placed in a cluster on a small coffee table just of the door that took me out onto the veranda. These were pictures of himself with others, himself with two young girls, a dog, a woman with the two young girls, the woman on her own, two other women, a man with an older lady and a few others. My mind got to thinking about who these people could be, I gave them names and provided them each with a role they played in his life then resolved to pay it no further mind. I was getting bored and mind restless so I walked back to the bed and lay back down when all of a sudden I heard a key turn in the door, I got up and stared impatiently to see who it would be. The key was yanked out the key hole and the door knob turned slowly and then the door flung open and there he was in all his awkward, sophisticated self. He smiled and I smiled back.    

Tuesday 17 July 2012

James Frey: The Last Testament


I (fortunately or not, depending on how you look at it) bought another James Frey book yesterday, this time it's The Last Testament of the Holy Bible. The fortunate and unfortunate bit of this is that fortunately for me I get to go on yet another amazing literary journey with this phenomenal writer, but unfortunately everything else that i have been busy with, be it writing, watching or reading has to take the back seat for a little while as i go on this "journey". 

I'm so excited about this book I could literally die.  

Sunday 8 July 2012

Current Read


Yes! It's very different from anything i have read recently, but I must admit to being a little bit excited about reading something that is sure to take me outside of my comfort zone. The book handles, as its subject matter, the inner workings of the cosmos. 
I begin reading tonight and I hope and Pray it's as good as i'm making it out to be in my mind because i really cannot deal with another let down of a read. Fingers crossed!!!

Tuesday 3 July 2012

William Blake's London


This poem, vivid and stinky and dirty in its narrative, does more than tell of the over-crowded London streets, prostitution and the bitter sadness contained within Blake’s hometown, it also speaks with marred passion provides the reader insight into the economical, political and human relation aspects of a life lived in the 1700s

Enjoy!!!


London

I wander thro’ each charter’d street,
Near where the charter’d Thames does flow,
And mark in every face I meet
Marks of weakness, marks of woe.
 
In every cry of every Man,
In every Infant’s cry of fear,
In every voice, in every ban,
The mind-forg’d manacles I hear. 
 
How the Chimney-sweeper’s cry
Every black'ning Church appalls;
And the hapless Soldier’s sigh
Runs in blood down Palace walls.
 
But most thro’ midnight streets I hear
How the youthful Harlot’s curse
Blasts the new-born Infant’s tear
And blights with plagues the Marriage hearse.

Monday 2 July 2012

Mhudi - Sol Plaatjie (IN MY OPINION)

I have been trying, unsuccessfully i might add, to read Sol Platjie's Mhudi for just under two months now. I was utterly elated when i bought the book and couldn't wait to sink my teeth into it, but now all this time has passed and i'm still not even half way through reading it.

This cross between fiction and historical events claims boldness, tumultuos dramatics and an epic tale of great love, but upon picking it up I found it very hard to read more than a few pages of the book in a sitting. I found it a tad to detailed, slow and lacking a rhythm and flow,  the author's use of language was out dated and that did nothing to aid it's "readability". 

I wanted to love this book, but it failed me and i must i admit i don't think i even like it.